The Haunting of Hill House: I Can’t Think of Anything Clever to Say About This Book

What can I say about The Haunting of Hill House?

No really, what can I say? I’m kind of at a loss.

I had high hopes for THoHH (that’s some sweet alliteration right there, eh?). I’d read passages from the book before that were held up as like the gold standard of characterization and setting mood. The way people talk about this book is as if it’s just the best damn thing ever.

It was fine. It didn’t bother me. It didn’t make me puke on myself in disgust or pee my pants in fright. It didn’t really cause me any kind of bodily eruption at all. It was just fine.

So that’s kind of my problem with writing a blog for the THoHH. I can write about bad books. In fact, it’s probably more fun to write about books that make me want to gouge out my own eyeballs. But books that are just fine make me really have to work to come up with some good subject matter. Here’s what I got. May it not induce bodily eruptions in you, dear reader.

The Haunting of Hill House is a misleading title. A more fitting, if less marketable title would be “Four Strangers Hanging Getting to Know Each Other at Hill House Which is Incidentally Pretty Creepy and Probably Haunted Too.”

Aside from some writing bugaboos that got under my skin which can be largely explained by the time the story was written (“The number of Tom Swifties in the book made my head want to explode,” he blogged irritated), the prose was really solid. I think it’s a testament to Shirley Jackson’s writing that Hill House itself comes across as a legitimately creepy place, despite the fact that very little actually haunting takes place in the book.

Maybe the problem was that I read this book with skewed expectations. I was expecting to be scared, but that’s probably unfair. Very few books actually scare me, and I don’t find hauntings to be all that scary anyway so I probably shouldn’t have expected much in that area anyway. To make matters worse, my expectations of genre were probably skewed to. Yes, THoHH was nominally a horror story in the haunting subgenre, but it was more “genre literature” than anything else.

And as a literature novel, it was a bit more compelling, though I’d probably need to go back and read it a second time to get into the deeper subtextual elements that I missed while I was hopefully waiting for an elevator of blood or maybe some zombie clowns or something.

Eleanor in particular felt like a fully three dimensional character and it felt as if there was much more to her than was directly revealed. The problem I had with her, and with the story in general, is that there just wasn’t all that much actually there. I liked the idea that Eleanor had these lingering issues with her mother’s care and death, but they never felt fully explored and linked to the plot of the book. The plot seemed to be “Eleanor went to live in a haunted house, started going crazy, got kicked out, and wrecked her car on purpose.”

I’m not one to limit a book’s appeal completely to the plot, but at a certain point I need SOME of it to be laid out for me. There were just so many elements that were inferred that it almost like I was asked to construct my own version of events. Now, I’m fine with that to some extent, but if I want to create a fantasy world, what the heck do I need the book for? The setting just wasn’t moving enough, and the characters not quite interesting enough, for me to stay full invested.

Now, tell me what an art-hating philistine I am for being unmoved by one of the supposed best literary horror stories of the 20th century.

No really. I need the traffic.

11 comments

  1. rtezak

    Thank you for this post. I could not find anything engaging about the characters or the plot of this book. I tried to feel something for this book, for its characters but I just couldn’t. I think you nailed it when you said that the book inferred too much, and because of that I found myself not vested in the story. I too was waiting for an elevator full of blood, which is kind of just a thing that needs to happen when you have a haunted house driving you to insane.

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    • michaelkingram

      Ah, at least I’m not the only one! I get that the book is supposed to be subtle and literary, but yeah I still want it to give me SOMETHING. Elaenor was the only character I could really identify with, and her behavior was just so difficult to understand that I ended up just going “huh?”

      I do wonder if this is the kind of book that you have to treat like a full-on literary novel… which in my experience means hate it madly the first time you read it and then go back through it two or three times to really get into the subtext to fully enjoy it. I mean, I probably won’t do that, but it might be a good idea.

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  2. Warner H. M.

    Even though I enjoyed the book quite a bit, I understand where you’re coming from. I’ve had two semesters of Mystery RIG and I’d rank this as #3 out the 10+ books I’ve read for class so far.
    I’m expecting these stories for this RIG to get scarier as the semester moves on. You made some good points, especially about the ending, which I think could have been clearer. I really enjoyed the way she set up the suspense. Even though it didn’t end up delivering a high-profile ending, the journey was fun. (for me….but, as stated in all my other posts, I’m kind of a wuss when it comes to horror stuff).

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    • michaelkingram

      I actually did enjoy the writing and some of the more subtle elements of character interaction. The story just never seemed to be there for me though. Now that I’ve read the next book on the assignment list I’m kind of missing the days of reading THOHH.

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  3. kristinsuzy

    You are an art-hating Philistine.

    But I don’t have a problem with the opinions you’ve expressed about THoHH. I, too, was left wanting something more. The scary bits WERE actually scary for me–that part where Eleanor was holding a hand that WASN’T Theodora’s? That was scary. Of course, the chapter ended, the next scene was cheerful, and it’s never mentioned again. Just like the night when the house went dancing after Mrs. Montague ticked it off. that must’ve been scary for the characters. Funny they don’t talk about it afterwards. Yeah, I wanted more. I wanted the tension to be drawn out a bit. I probably don’t need an elevator of blood, but these characters seemed too ready to forget some traumatizing events.

    I agree that Eleanor was a well-developed character, and I thought Theodora was too. Luke, on the other hand, just seemed like a carbon copy of Theodora, but without the sex appeal and combative streak. I think a modern editor would say, “Hey, this guy’s not doing much in this story–you could just as well delete him. No one’s going to believe this closeted lesbian is going to fight for that guy’s attention anyway.”

    But if you have something cross-wise to say about Leonardo da Vinci or Edward Hopper, I will totally cut you.
    Or sling a stone and knock you out, Goliath.

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    • michaelkingram

      I thought it was odd too that they were totally cool with everything in the morning. “Aw shucks, my clothes got ruined in a deluge of unexplained blood. Now I have not clothes!” Wait, what? I think I subconsciously wrote that all off as the house getting to them, so I did give it a pass for the most part, but it did set off some alarm bells at first.

      I do wonder though if something in me is broken when it comes to getting scared. It’s not like I’m not scared at all. The idea of a misfiled homeowners insurance document or cancer scares the pants off me! I wonder if I just haven’t used up all my fear juice on ebola, mass shootings, and savage book reviews so there’s nothing left for ghosts.

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  4. Matt Andrew

    I don’t think it’s too much to expect to be scared. I spent a lot of time on this book (mainly because it took me so long to slog through it) and it’s a bit irritating to be left feeling so underwhelmed about a book so highly touted in this genre. Expectations…

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    • michaelkingram

      In general, you’re probably right. But I seriously can’t remember the last book that scared me, so I might not be a fair barometer for that kind of thing. I think at some level I’m saying to myself “okay, so even if there was a house that occasionally killed people, is that even close to as scary as Pogo the Clown?”

      I think reality has ruined me to horror for life.

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  5. danjfiore

    This is going to sound like a jab at THoHH, but it’s not: I keep comparing it in my head to something like “Ghosts of Girlfriends Past.” I’m not really sure what that movie’s about, as I’ve never seen it (I SWEAR!). But I’m pretty sure it deals with ghosts of some kind. Anyway, the marketing for that movie would have been idiotic to market it as a horror movie, because I’m pretty sure it’s a pretty standard Romantic Comedy… or something. But, my point (I think) is, imagine going to go see Ghosts of Girlfriends Past expecting The Shining. You might even love RomComs, but you’re gonna be pretty pissed. Marketing THoHH as first-and-foremost a horror novel probably only does the book a disservice. I had no idea where this comment was going when I started typing it, so hopefully something in there made sense…

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    • kristinsuzy

      You’re right, Dan. I had high expectations, and I expected a little–more. My expectations left me feeling underwhelmed.

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